[問題]GWD12-1 (即9-1)

[bear]

這題答案是B還是Eㄚ????
我選B耶~~~

A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer’s Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man.

A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man


另外, 由此題,我想問大家 ,including 和 that included 這兩個分別在哪 ?

[QQcandy]

B is good for me.

[吳志道]

including 和 that included
就我所知道的分析:<相對 不絕對>
(1)N that V vs N ving => latter well because 簡潔
(2)N1....,N2 that V VS N1......,N2,ving =>考句意
請指教^^

[bear]

including 和 that included
就我所知道的分析:<相對 不絕對>
(1)N that V vs N ving => latter well because 簡潔
(2)N1....,N2 that V VS N1......,N2,ving =>考句意
請指教^^

終於有人回答我問題啦~~
請問一下....第二條可否再說的清楚點???

你講的滿玄的~~
謝謝~~

[agk99]

吳同學說的有理呀
只是寫在一起，熊妹看不懂

他說的第一種狀況是that + V, 或是去that 改V為Ving
當然後者好，簡潔

至於N1, N2 that V 或是
N1, N2, ving，則不一定誰好，要由句意決定，OG有例子

[bear]

吳同學說的有理呀
只是寫在一起，熊妹看不懂

他說的第一種狀況是that + V, 或是去that 改V為Ving
當然後者好，簡潔

至於N1, N2 that V 或是
N1, N2, ving，則不一定誰好，要由句意決定，OG有例子

看句意的意思是....
若V 是修飾N2 ==>用N1, N2 that V
若V是修飾N1 ==>N1, N2, ving

是這樣嗎??? :-$

[agk99]

這樣講比我講的清楚，但請注意另一指標，ving都是形容原題主詞
你可以搭配check

[micht]

from Collin's dictioanry

including is a preposition

is used to say that one or more people or things mentioned are part of the larger group of people or things that you are refering to.

Costs and be from $500 per child per week including food.
Nine soliders were injured, including two wounded by gunfire.

included [adj]

is used to emphasize that the person or things mentioned is part of the gorup of people or thing that you are referring to.

All of us, myself included, had been totally committed to the party.

看一下definition...
included is an adjective
including is a preposition

[bear]

米妹.....

你真是讚!!!

謝謝~~

[訪客]

我也選B
但看到micht說including是介詞的時候
想到,破折號後面跟介係詞片語好像怪怪的
我覺得E就只有哪個being怪怪的
不然one~the other對秤的非常漂亮
繼續討論

[訪客]

我目前只找到OG一題有破折號的
破折號需與前面的所修飾具有同等地位
名詞vs.名詞
所以B實在很頭痛,覺得是真命天子,豈知命運捉弄人 :'(

18. Each of Hemingway's wives--Hadley Richardson. Pauline Pfeiffer. Martha Gelhom. and Mary Welsh --were strong and interesting women, very different from the often pallid women who populate his novels.
(A) Each of Hemingway's wives--Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--were strong and interesting women,
(B) Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh--each of them Hemingway's wives--were strong and, interesting women,
(C) Hemingway's wives--Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--were all strong and interesting women,
(D) Strong and interesting women—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--each a wife of Hemingway, was
(E) Strong and interesting women—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--every one of Hemingway's wives were

[Grace]

關於dash的用法,我查了一下,請參考以下這個link:
http://chuma.cas.usf.edu/~olson/pms/dash.html

至於這一題,我認為選E 比B還好,
1. a Black Amercian is better than Black Americans,因為black Americans會讓讀者以為這本書作者不只一人, a black American 顯然明確多, 大家想想OG有一題 in "a" human cell , 及own a bicycle 這兩題與這題考點相似

2. dash用法形同兩個comman當插入語或同位語補充,但相較之下dash目的是要強調該插入語或同位語這裡dash後面緊接including 用法錯誤,including前面慣用comma.

3. 補充CD討論: ETS 偏好 ones's work, rather than "by 作者".

[Behemoth]

現在回來看看,這題我支持選e

理由如下

1.其實句子前面是 one of the three best novels
這邊要講的是one,所以後面用單數a black american比較好

2.再來看e,以所有格形式表示跟前面也很平衡不是嗎..

3.仔細思量一下grace對dash的看法,發現的確如此,bc再dash後面接including的確錯了
其實似乎也沒看過這種用法

4.其實當時看有being不爽就沒仔細看了
這告訴我們千萬別看being不太爽,不然他就會讓你不太爽

[micht]

嗯 現在看一看 ...選(E)...同B爺的論點

三個作家作品都是"A mixture of poems and short fiction"

現在看覺得 (E)順得不得了 只差being再作怪

[bear]

那being 在這裡角色是????