成績 4.5 ，雖然不是很高，但是申請也夠用了!
想拿來跟大家分享，參考張凱宏的講義，然後自己編的
(想說只用一次也太浪費了
中年歐巴桑的心態)
希望對大家有幫助囉
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我自己的模板
1.有很多因素
A threshold problem is that the author neglect some critical factors which affect the ……. The profitability of the company is attributed to many complex factors, such as the macro-economic of environment, the current regulations or incentives of the government , and fluctuation of prices of raw material. Any of these factors might have played a bigger role than the company’s experience. Therefore, it is questionable to draw the conclusion that…
2. 條件不同，遭遇不同
Another problem that seriously weaken the logic of this argument is that we are uncertain what happened to A will necessarily happen to B. Yes, theoretically A may….just as B did. But what if A is headed by a competent president who…. If so , company A will not…
3.過去經驗不能用於未來
Moreover, the author unfairly assumes that the situation of A will remain unchanged.
In fact, the economic situation keeps changing. What worked in the past may not work in the future. The principle may worked for…in the past, but it doesn’t work for …in the future. Therefore, it is unconvinced that…
4. 真正造成的原因
I wonder what the roots causes of …are. If indeed…(t超題目), then …. But what if A’s poor performance is caused by economic recession that plagues all corporations, then…
5.全國性的調查不一定適用
Although a national survey indicates that…, it doesn’t necessarily mean that…. ….is due to other reasons such as . If so,…………………..
6.加強證據
The evidence cited in the newspaper is weak. In order to convince 人 about 事, the article should provide statistical evidence regarding 事. To what level is…. ? how much of.. is..? how frequently ? these question need to be answer before we can conclude whether…
But the article doesn’t provide any such figure, which weakens the persuasive force of the argument.
7.提出想知道的問題
時在不知怎麼下手究盡量提問題吧
8. 數據的來源
The credibility of the study cited in the argument is doubtful. We don’t know whether the figures were conducted by a qualified person or a qualified organization such as .., and whether the sample of the study was adequately selected. These figures may cited by the supporter of . therefore,....
9 a b 沒有關聯性
It is one thing clame that …. It is another thing to say that… Just because …people will …
感恩....
