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文章qixz_orig » 2007-10-19 18:49

“Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our larger goal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.”

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文章lucyyeh » 2007-10-22 22:27

這一題我也覺得不好寫

我也沒有範文,建議可以從 quality, distribution, risk management 這三點去寫

1. Cookville廠做的快不一定良率高,不見得有省到overall co
2. 把Cookville廠的其他機器移走,那要是這些機器生產的產品在當地地也有很多客戶群,把機器移走,搞的以後以後必須由別的廠把貨運到Cookville,這樣運輸成本有省到嗎?
3. 覺得不應該雞蛋放在同一個籃子裡,如果cookville只做drill bit production, what if there is little or no demand of drill bit,那Cookville的員工還不是坐在那邊領薪水,
那公司有省到錢嗎?

參考參考!
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