請教一個文法

[best555tw]

The administrative department and I worked together to plan and negotiate, from welcoming, briefing, environment introduction, teaching, research and other series of planning and services.

這是我請翻譯社翻譯的句子
覺得有點怪
plan 和 negociate 不用接受詞嗎
請問這是正確的句子嗎?
是怎樣的文法結構?


如果不對要怎麼改?


thanks

[ffff]

This sentence seems fine, i think.

[sandarac]

The administrative department and I worked together to plan and negotiate, from welcoming, briefing, environment introduction, teaching, research and other series of planning and services.

這是我請翻譯社翻譯的句子
覺得有點怪
plan 和 negociate 不用接受詞嗎
請問這是正確的句子嗎?
是怎樣的文法結構?


如果不對要怎麼改?

thanks

In my opinion, "environmental introduction" will be better!

[sharonstone]

William的建議是分成兩句來寫

environment introduction其實我不大明白是什麼樣的東西
不過如果可以從前後文推敲的話應該還好
只是覺得可能有更好的字可以用就是了...

[best555tw]

感謝大家的回答


我的意思是做還境介紹
不知environment introduction對不對

宣稱native speaker翻的
有時候翻的很idiomatic
有時的翻的很"中式"(照字面翻，感覺直接中翻英)

就是"阿沙力"那家
有人用過嗎
因為下班後沒什麼時間
進度很慢
就都請他們翻了

只是有時候感覺是請非native speaker翻的

後來我請他重翻
他就把這具改成

For the visit, the administrative department and I worked together on the planning and presentation of the school’s program. I was in charge of welcoming the visitors, conducting a short introduction of our school, bringing the teacher and his students around the campus, and discussing our school’s research activities.

就感覺好多了


有人用過這一家嗎