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文章chencraig0227 » 2008-03-22 13:56

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The federal immigration station on Ellis Island, which was first opened in 1892, then rebuilt in 1900, processing nearly three quarters of all immigrants entering the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century.

(A) The federal immigration station on Ellis Island, which was first opened in 1892, then rebuilt in 1900, processing nearly three quarters of all immigrants entering the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century.
(B) Having processed nearly three quarters of all immigrants who enter the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island first opened in 1892 and then was rebuilt in 1900.
(C) Processing nearly three quarters of all immigrants to enter the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island first opened in 1892, being rebuilt in 1900.
(D) First opened in 1892, then rebuilt in 1900, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island processed nearly three quarters of all immigrants entering the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century.
(E) Of all immigrants to enter the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island processed nearly three quarters of them, having first opened in 1892 and rebuilt in 1900.

ANS:(D)

在請問一個弱弱的問題
兩個分詞為首的插入句放在句首 如正解反藍的部份
這樣的用法是可以的吧!(當初做題猶豫了一下)
兩句中間 有加and跟沒加and有差嗎??
如果變成 First opened...and then rebult..., the federal immigration...
文法上可以接受嗎??
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文章dibert8 » 2008-03-26 04:13

(D) 雖然不太好 (fragment), 但是比較其他選項,它是比較好的選項 (i.e. 語意可以理解,沒有致命的文法和邏輯錯誤).

The federal immigration station on Ellis Island, which was first opened in 1892, then rebuilt in 1900, processing nearly three quarters of all immigrants entering the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century.
(A) The federal immigration station on Ellis Island, which was first opened in 1892, then rebuilt in 1900, processing nearly three quarters of all immigrants entering the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century.
(B) Having processed nearly three quarters of all immigrants who enter the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island first opened in 1892 and then was rebuilt in 1900.
(C) Processing nearly three quarters of all immigrants to enter the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island first opened in 1892, being rebuilt in 1900.
(D) First opened in 1892, then rebuilt in 1900, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island processed nearly three quarters of all immigrants entering the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century.
(E) Of all immigrants to enter the United States in the first quarter of the twentieth century, the federal immigration station on Ellis Island processed nearly three quarters of them, having first opened in 1892 and rebuilt in 1900.

(A) which = Ellis Island; then 不能當連接詞; 句子沒有動詞
(B) (C) 分詞構句時態不合理
(E) of all immigrants 不能修飾 the federal immigration station; in 1892 用過去式
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Re: PP1-110

文章dibert8 » 2008-03-26 04:18

chencraig0227 \$m[1]:兩句中間 有加and跟沒加and有差嗎??
如果變成 First opened...and then rebult..., the federal immigration...
文法上可以接受嗎??


覺得用 and 連接(平衡原則)應該是比較好的寫法.
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文章rola1225 » 2008-07-23 20:24

B 應是錯在 opened 的前面沒有 was 吧
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